While Ash wouldn't notice due to being with her all the time, most people would consider her quite the beauty, in fact, when she was 17 she appeared on the on the front cover of the new year bumper issue of “Pokémon Pals” alongside a flower Pokémon known as Bellsprout.
I'm not sure if that's a typo or not...
Also, can you colour code your thoughts please? A bit difficult to follow because half of it is the story whilst the other half feels like you're intjecting with your own thoughts about the scene. Or maybe it's the author's thoughts on it?
Also like the other guy above, can you fix the dropbox link for the pdf copy? It's 404 for me as well....so only way to read the novel is on the website.....which you've luckily also provided....
typo and other things....
I'm not sure if that's a typo or not...
Also, can you colour code your thoughts please? A bit difficult to follow because half of it is the story whilst the other half feels like you're intjecting with your own thoughts about the scene. Or maybe it's the author's thoughts on it?
Also like the other guy above, can you fix the dropbox link for the pdf copy? It's 404 for me as well....so only way to read the novel is on the website.....which you've luckily also provided....